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Author: admin1  //  Category: massage tampa

The Miracle of the Massage Chair
“Oh my god! It’s unbelievable that I have no more back pains anymore. This chair truly makes miracles!” This reminds me of the day that I was purchased by my master, George Tillman, which he had suffered from severe back pains all his life. He had spent thousands of dollars on medicine that was suppose to cure his intense pains. But none of those medicines made him feel relaxed. Unexpectedly, he found the perfect piece of furniture at “Larry’s Furniture Galore”, which what he found in this store changed his life completely. This is where he found me, Tasha the electric massage chair, and this is how the whole story occurred.
On July 1, 2006, I finally arrived to “Larry’s Furniture Galore” in Tampa Bay, Florida, which I was part of the new furniture that was going to be displayed. On my way to the store, I heard the driver say that I was going to be the only electric massage chair available for purchase in the entire city. He also explained that the store was going to have a meeting for the customers. The manager of the facility wanted everyone to know about my arriving and that I was a miracle chair that cured intense back pains of any type of severity. Hurriedly, after my arrival, the manager advertised me in the newspaper and before I was even put on display, the store was packed with curious customers that wanted to know more about my functions. When the employees explained details about me to the customers, their facial gestures displayed amusement. They were surprised that I had the power to cure people. One of the employees explained to them that only one lucky person was going to be able to buy me, since they were only allowed to sell one chair in the entire city. They explained that they were going to do a raffle, in which one lucky person was going to have the opportunity to take me home. After the customers heard the announcement, they were like predators ready to catch their prey when arguing about who was going to buy me. Out of all the customers that were preset, one man really caught my attention, his name was George Tillman. When the employee told him that if he wanted a raffle ticket he said, “I don’ t think that the electric chair is so great like you guys explained. But sure why not. Maybe this chair will make my terrible back pains go away? You never know.” After the employees were completely finished passing out the raffle tickets, they explained to the customers that they were going to have a thirty minute break before they announced the wining ticket.
While the customers were waiting for the announcement of the wining ticket, I smelled the people eating chips, cookies and all types of snacks. Everyone was nervous and anxious about which lucky person was going to have the winning ticket. One of the employees explained, “Everyone be ready to have your ticket out because we are going to announce the number of the winning ticket. Everyone pay close attention. The winning ticket is 1025634”. At that moment I saw people talking loudly and saw them looking at their raffle tickets to see if they were the winners. Nobody seemed to have that number until one man named George happily screamed, “I won the chair. I’m the only person that can purchase this chair, because they only have one in the entire city. Wow I’m so surprised!” That instant I felt important and interesting because everyone wanted to buy me. The customers that didn’t have the winning ticket expressed disappointment in their face. I was as excited as a dolphin swimming in the water. Inside of me I was cheering with joy, because now I was going to have a home. Now I had an owner and a mission to accomplish. I couldn’t let him down specially if he needed my help so much.
Happily the man placed me into his pickup truck and he drove home. When we arrived to his home, the old man let me out of the box and placed me into his living room. The house was big and spacious. The living room was colorful and full of family pictures. I really liked this house because it made me feel like home, which I had never had before since I was a brand new electric chair just opened from the box. This house made feel just right.
After placing me in the living room the old man said, “Even though I was the lucky winner, I still have doubts about you. I can’t believe that you can cure back pains, that’s impossible. I have been taking medicine for years and nothing has worked. If medicine can’t cure me, then how can I be so confident that you will. But until I don’t see any results, I cannot comment. Now, I will try you to see if you make miracles like they say.” George’s words made me feel in a way depressed, because he had never tried me and he was already doubting about me. That instant I knew that I couldn’t let myself down.
Mr. Tillman came back and sat down. I began with my mission, which was to give him a good massage so his horrible back pains could go away instantly. I gave him a massage for and hour

Hi, ***~Fanny~*** !

I would suggest that, even for a possible 10 points, you will not receive any or many other answers because it requires "major surgery." Your actual story is fine as is your spelling also but your punctuation and paragraphing are a nightmare. Paragraphs start after a change in time, subject or activity.
You also need to work on your word selection to choose the best word for the job.
I will work straight through it now and send it soon if you promise to look at my proposed changes and try to work out the reasons behind them.

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The Miracle of the Massage Chair

“Oh my God! It’s unbelievable that I have no more back pains. This chair truly workss miracles!” These words remind me of the day that I was purchased by my master, George Tillman, after he had suffered from severe back pains all of his life. He had spent thousands of dollars on medicine that was supposed to cure his intense pains, but none of those medicines made him feel relaxed. Unexpectedly, he found the perfect piece of furniture at “Larry’s Furniture Galore,” when what he found in this store changed his life completely. This is where he found me, Tasha the electric massage chair, and this is how the whole story unfolded.

On July 1, 2006, I finally arrived to “Larry’s Furniture Galore” in Tampa Bay, Florida, where I was part of the new furniture range that was going to be displayed. On my way to the store, I heard the driver say that I was going to be the only electric massage chair available for purchase in the entire city. He also explained that the store was going to have a meeting for the customers. The manager of the facility wanted everyone to know about my arriving and that I was a miracle chair that cured intense back pains of any type of severity.

Hurriedly, after my arrival, the manager advertised me in the newspaper and, before I was even put on display, the store was packed with curious customers that wanted to know more about my functions. When the employees explained details about me to the customers, their facial gestures displayed amusement as they were surprised that I had the power to cure people. One of the staff explained to them that only one lucky person was going to be able to buy me, since they were only allowed to sell one chair in the entire city. He also explained that they were going to do a raffle, in which one lucky person was going to have the opportunity to take me home.

After the customers heard the announcement, they were like predators ready to catch their prey, arguing about who was going to buy the tickets. Out of all of the customers that were present one man, whose name was George Tillman, really caught my attention. When the employee asked him that if he wanted a raffle ticket he said, “I don’ t think that the electric chair is as great as you people explained. But sure why not. Maybe this chair will make my terrible back pains go away. You never know.”

After the employees had completely finished passing out the raffle tickets, they explained to the customers that they were going to have a thirty-minute break before they drew and announced the winning ticket. While the customers were waiting for the announcement of the winning ticket, I smelled the people eating chips, cookies and all types of snacks. Everyone was nervous and anxious about which lucky person was going to have the winning ticket. One of the employees explained, “Everyone be ready to have your ticket out because we are going to announce the number of the winner. Everyone pay close attention. The winning ticket is 1025634”. At that moment I saw people talking loudly and saw them looking at their raffle tickets to see if they were the winner. Nobody seemed to have that number until one man named George happily screamed, “I won the chair. I’m the only person that can purchase this chair, because they only have one in the entire city. Wow, I’m so surprised!” That instant I felt important and interesting because everyone wanted to buy me.

The customers that didn’t have the winning ticket expressed disappointment in their faces. I was as excited as a dolphin swimming in the ocean. Inside of me I was cheering with joy because now I was going to have a home. Now I had an owner and a mission to accomplish. I couldn’t let him down, especially if he needed my help so much.

Happily the man placed me into his pick-up truck and drove home where he let me out of the box and placed me into the living room of his house which attractive and spacious. The living room was colorful and full of family pictures. I really liked this house because it made me feel like home, which I had never experienced before since I was a brand new electric chair just out of its box. This house made feel just right.

After placing me in the living room the old man said, “Even though I was the lucky winner, I still have doubts about you. I can’t believe that you can cure back pains, that’s impossible. I have been taking medicine for years and nothing has worked. If medicine can’t cure me, then how can I be so confident that you will. But until I don’t see any results, I cannot comment. Now, I will try you to see if you make miracles like they say.” George’s words made me feel, in a way, depressed because he had never tried me and he was already doubting about me. At that instant I knew that I could not let myself down.

Mr. Tillman came back and sat down. I began with my mission, which was to give him a good massage so his horrible back pains could go away instantly. I gave him a massage for and hour ……..

What can I substitute for a massage table?

Author: admin1  //  Category: massage table

I need to practice my massage techniques on my dad, but I don’t have a massage table. He usually lies on a bed and that works fine, especially for sternocleidomastoid massage, but I need something to act as a head cradle so he can lie face down and leave me access to the back of his neck.

I like Theresa’s answer, using pillows from foot to shoulder and then using a rolled towel for a face cradle. Just remember this–find something for him to lie on that is approximately the width of a massage table. Massaging on a bed not only entails the person you’re massaging to move when you need to get at their other side but is REALLY bad for your own back. I advise against it.

At your first opportunity, get a table. Look on your school bulletin board for a used one. Some online sites sell tables cheaper as does Costco. You may possibly be able to rent one from someone who has an extra. Aside from your hands, this is your most essential tool. As you earn as a licensed therapist, save up for the best table you can afford. Then sell your used one to someone like you!

Stabilizer connected to voltage regulator connected to massage chair?

Author: admin1  //  Category: massage chair

Connected a voltage stabilizer to 230V 50Hz outlet. Connected a voltage regulator (output 110V) 120Watts to the output of stabilizer. Connected a 110V 60Hz massage chair to the output of regulator. The regulator burnt with smoke coming out. Any reasons why this could have happened.

The most likely answer is that your massage chair draws WAY more that 120 watts, or demanded way more current (amperage) than the 120W unit could handle. 120W at 110V equals about 1 amp (not much). The powerful motor on your chair probably draws ten times that, or 10 amps, which equals 1100 watts!

You need to determine how many total watts the chair requires, then add about 10% more to that value for a safety margin, and buy a 110v power supply that can handle that amount of wattage/amperage. It should be printed somewhere on the chair. Check out this calculator to help you figure it out: http://www.crownaudio.com/apps_htm/designtools/ohms-law.htm

The 50/60 Hz disparity is another potential pain all together, that may or may not cause problems down the road, but was not the cause of your burnout.

Need help naming my blog!?

Author: admin1  //  Category: massage blog

I want to start a blog about being a massage therapist and about my journey getting there but I don’t know what to name it!? Any ideas?!

Just look for a foreign word